Things to improve

We showed our teacher our thriller title sequence so far, and there were some things we need to improve on and changes we need to make:

• Such as more dramatic shots, including distortion and amplified images to convey the tension we want to create and make the audience feel
• Instead of text, we are to use hand-written writing on a whiteboard, in a neat, gothic hand-writing. When we add this to our project, we will add effects over the top, such as a red tint to make it more interesting and to create suspense
• Also, we are short of our time limit, so we need to get more footage to add, which we can do in our own time with our own cameras

These things will hopefully improve our project and bring the grade it's worth at the moment up.